The
next day, lunchtime came around quickly. I took Kevin and Margo to
the R.E. Room, where, as he had promised, Oliver was waiting. He sat
on a table, swinging his legs and drinking a Coke. I knew that fizzy
drinks weren't allowed in our school, but didn't mention it.
We
stood there awkwardly until Oliver gestured towards the table in
front of him and said, “Going to sit down then?”
We
squashed onto the table in front of him and waited expectantly as he
sipped his Coke. Then he fixed his eyes on us.
“I
heard that you all believe in cooties.” He said, keeping his gaze
steady. I was sitting in the middle and felt as if he was staring at
me alone instead of at us all.
“Cooties!”
Kevin shrieked.
Oliver
raised one eyebrow.
“Lots
of us do,” Margo explained. “Kevin started it.”
“Do
you believe in cooties, Jade?” Oliver asked, watching me
closely for any kind of reaction.
“Yes,”
I muttered.
“Well,
then,” he got up and threw his Coke bottle in the bin. “It seems
that you all need cootie shots.”
“Cootie
shots?” said Kevin. “I've never heard of them.”
“You
wouldn't have,” said Oliver dismissively. “Come here. I've got
the shot in my pocket. Don't tell me that you're-” he looked at me
with a glint in his eye, “chicken?”
“No!”
yelled Kevin, stalking towards him. Oliver took a long needle out of
his pocket. Kevin stepped back a bit.
“Come
on,” Oliver sounded a little impatient now. He grabbed
Kevin's arm and stuck the needle in. Kevin gave a stifled scream and
then dropped to the ground.
Margo
and I stared. What had Oliver done to him?
“Have
you killed him?” whispered Margo, beside me.
“Yes.”
Oliver replied breezily. “Now, girls, come with me.”
We
were so scared that he would hurt us that we followed him out of the
classroom, through the twisting hallways. Soon enough we were in a
part of the school I didn't know and didn't like – the corridors
were narrow and painted either black or grey. Margo grabbed my hand
and squeezed it hard. I squeezed back and we carried on.
“How
do you know about this bit of the school?” I asked bravely, but
when I got no answer I didn't speak again. Margo was frozen from the
waist upwards, her hand now limp in mine. She bit down hard on her
lip and I saw a trickle of blood there.
Suddenly
we came to a dead end. Oliver turned to us and gave a snake-like
smile.
“Now,
girls, let's go in.” He said, the smirk fixed onto his face.
“It's
a wall.” Margo pointed out.
Without
a sound, the boy turned and pushed a hand against the wall. It slid
open to reveal a chamber with nothing but chains attached to the
walls inside.
I
wanted to run. I wanted to scream. But suddenly I realised that I was
frozen to the spot. Oliver was now inside the chamber and was
beckoning us towards him with his index finger. I felt myself walking
towards him and I tried to fight it, but it was no use. He'd put some
kind of spell on me.
He
attached the chains around my wrists and ankles, and then did the
same to Margo, who looked terrified.
“Goodbye
girls,” he said, his eyes suddenly turning cold with evil. “Have
a nice century.”
And
the wall closed shut, shrouding us in darkness.
“Is
that story true, Auntie Sophie?” asked Mary. “Was there really an
Oliver, and a Margo and a Kevin and a Jade?”
“I
don't know, honey.” Auntie Sophie shrugged. “I doubt it. It's
just a story. Will you go to bed now?”
Mary
let herself be tucked in and then said, “Auntie Sophie?”
“Yes,
darling?” the aunt replied.
“How
much do you love me?” Mary cracked a smile.
“To
the moon and back,” laughed Auntie Sophie. “Night, honey.”
“Wait!”
the little girl yelped.
“What
is it?”
“Are
you sure you don't know if the story's real?”
“Why
do you ask?” the woman cocked her head and smiled slightly.
“Because
you told it as if it was you were Jade.” Mary said simply.
“Ah.
Well, no, honey, I don't know if it's real.” Auntie Sophie lied.
Because
her name didn't used to be Sophie. It used to be Margo, and she had
gotten out that day, left her best friend Jade in the chamber to die
and decay. She never forgave herself.
But
that's a different story.
The End.
That's it! Is it good? :)
OMFG!! THAT STORY WAS AWSHUM!! I am looking forward to hearing more short stories from you :)!! I love your style of writing and the twist that the story presented!! Keep up the good work!!! :D
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DeleteMAWR! MAWR! PLEASE PLEASE PLLLLLLLLLLLLLEASE WRITE WHY MARGO LEFT JADE IN THERE TO ROT IF YOU DO I WILL LOVE YOU FOREVER!!!
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BECOME AN AUTHOUR! XOX
That's what I hope to become ;)
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